Review Detail of Sabaroth_zarkiel in Immortal Cultivation Temptations
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I was also thinking of the perspective thing, I will try to implement this idea in the later chapters as well
Yajin3004:Well.... Yuri is completely fine as long as they all are heroines and love our MC. He will always be number one for them(no other men). They can enjoy and have physical relation in his presence and absence. Also, there should be all kind of chapters from the perspective of MC, heroines and also 3rd person.
Dark_Sovereign_28:Yes, there will be both Slight Yuri and too much Ntr(Netori) in this novel.
Well.... Yuri is completely fine as long as they all are heroines and love our MC. He will always be number one for them(no other men). They can enjoy and have physical relation in his presence and absence. Also, there should be all kind of chapters from the perspective of MC, heroines and also 3rd person.
Dark_Sovereign_28:Yes, there will be both Slight Yuri and too much Ntr(Netori) in this novel.
Dark_Sovereign_28:Yes, there will be both Slight Yuri and too much Ntr(Netori) in this novel.
Yajin3004:Well.... Yuri is completely fine as long as they all are heroines and love our MC. He will always be number one for them(no other men). They can enjoy and have physical relation in his presence and absence. Also, there should be all kind of chapters from the perspective of MC, heroines and also 3rd person.
Judging by your words, you are underdeveloped or maybe you were dropped headfirst in childhood. Let's then have his girls sleep with other men in his absence, but they will only love mc. Why, he's their number one and they only love him. Just then the question is, if they only love him, then why would they have fun with other members of the harem? I hope such spermotoxic little boys like you will disappear from our planet someday
Yajin3004:Well.... Yuri is completely fine as long as they all are heroines and love our MC. He will always be number one for them(no other men). They can enjoy and have physical relation in his presence and absence. Also, there should be all kind of chapters from the perspective of MC, heroines and also 3rd person.
I remember one author also said that there would only be a slight yuri. And as a result, the girls started to strap each other on.
Dark_Sovereign_28:Yes, there will be both Slight Yuri and too much Ntr(Netori) in this novel.
Fjdjjfjsjiwos:Judging by your words, you are underdeveloped or maybe you were dropped headfirst in childhood. Let's then have his girls sleep with other men in his absence, but they will only love mc. Why, he's their number one and they only love him. Just then the question is, if they only love him, then why would they have fun with other members of the harem? I hope such spermotoxic little boys like you will disappear from our planet someday
Fjdjjfjsjiwos:I remember one author also said that there would only be a slight yuri. And as a result, the girls started to strap each other on.
none of the members of the harem will ever sleep with another man beside the main character, after they accept being with in his harem.
Fjdjjfjsjiwos:Judging by your words, you are underdeveloped or maybe you were dropped headfirst in childhood. Let's then have his girls sleep with other men in his absence, but they will only love mc. Why, he's their number one and they only love him. Just then the question is, if they only love him, then why would they have fun with other members of the harem? I hope such spermotoxic little boys like you will disappear from our planet someday
No, it's clear that they won't sleep with other men. I just answered this to a person who thinks Yuri is normal without the presence of an mc. If all this is going to be only with mc and only for his pleasure, I can agree (of course, it's better without Yuri at all, but okay). But when girls have fun without mc, it already looks like cheating.
Dark_Sovereign_28:none of the members of the harem will ever sleep with another man beside the main character, after they accept being with in his harem.
will take that into consideration, anyways not like anyone specially wants to see that here, right?!
Fjdjjfjsjiwos:No, it's clear that they won't sleep with other men. I just answered this to a person who thinks Yuri is normal without the presence of an mc. If all this is going to be only with mc and only for his pleasure, I can agree (of course, it's better without Yuri at all, but okay). But when girls have fun without mc, it already looks like cheating.
Fjdjjfjsjiwos:No, it's clear that they won't sleep with other men. I just answered this to a person who thinks Yuri is normal without the presence of an mc. If all this is going to be only with mc and only for his pleasure, I can agree (of course, it's better without Yuri at all, but okay). But when girls have fun without mc, it already looks like cheating.
Dark_Sovereign_28:will take that into consideration, anyways not like anyone specially wants to see that here, right?!
Fjdjjfjsjiwos:Judging by your words, you are underdeveloped or maybe you were dropped headfirst in childhood. Let's then have his girls sleep with other men in his absence, but they will only love mc. Why, he's their number one and they only love him. Just then the question is, if they only love him, then why would they have fun with other members of the harem? I hope such spermotoxic little boys like you will disappear from our planet someday
then sorry I'm not in yuri of any type even kissing or licking . .. .and I'm taking back my 5star review .. .. .. I have to remove it from my collections đ too. .sigh. .. .i like the synopsis but Yuri is a big NO no for me . .. .. tell me if u write ohe without yuri one someday I'll support you from my main account đ
Dark_Sovereign_28:Yes, there will be both Slight Yuri and too much Ntr(Netori) in this novel.
yh . .. we can see who is societal toxic here......do u even ever donate a web novel writer a 1 dollar ... if u never then u neither deserve to post toxic suggestions like this nor deserve to state your preferences .. ... .. ... u don't need to reply đ otherwise u will only pollute the comment section
Fjdjjfjsjiwos:Judging by your words, you are underdeveloped or maybe you were dropped headfirst in childhood. Let's then have his girls sleep with other men in his absence, but they will only love mc. Why, he's their number one and they only love him. Just then the question is, if they only love him, then why would they have fun with other members of the harem? I hope such spermotoxic little boys like you will disappear from our planet someday
I may have misunderstood you, but are you calling me toxic because I hate Yuri, and I also don't like it when people suggest that the author add Yuri to their novel? As far as I know, you don't like Yuri either, just like I don't like Yuri.
Spirit_Immortal:yh . .. we can see who is societal toxic here......do u even ever donate a web novel writer a 1 dollar ... if u never then u neither deserve to post toxic suggestions like this nor deserve to state your preferences .. ... .. ... u don't need to reply đ otherwise u will only pollute the comment section