Review Detail of Azure_Abyss in Harry Potter: The Dark Lord Dudley Dursley

I think this story has great potential. I find that the fusion of JK Rowling's somewhat soft magic system and cold, hard science to be a hard thing to achieve, but I think you've done a good job doing that, and I look forward to seeing Dudley achieve great things, haha. That being said, would you agree to a review swap for my own novel? It's fine if you don't though, no need to feel pressured. But when's all said and done, I feel like more people will click on stories that have a rating!