Review Detail of Val_Blue in The Undead Uprising

i got bored in chapter 1. it has one of the messiest introduction I've read. intros should be introduction not some kind of info dump that makes the readers confused . making the words more fancy doesn't really fascinate me(idk about you guys) instead for me it just makes it more untidy because you don't deliver the point of the story, and it's just chapter 1 but the words used makes it more confusing because the story just started. I can't make a picture of what you're trying to deliver in this chapter. anyway that's my honest review . toodles ✌️