Review Detail of OGC in In Another World With My Heavenly Beast

Shameless author here. (If I don't give myself five stars, who will? lol) This is my first time ever writing a novel and honestly it is very hard. There are times where I write an entire chapter only to delete it and restart because it wasn't good enough. I have very high standards when it comes to what I want my novel to be. As some might have already realized, the first few sentences in the first chapter of my novel are very similar to "In Another World With my Smartphone". Which if you realized that good job, I guess? Anyway, other than those few sentences, my novel will be completely different and have my own style. Personally, "In Another World With my Smartphone" is my favorite light novel, though there were some things which I didn't like, for example, one of them being mechas. So, there won't be mechas in my story. (Lol, probably, who knows?) To be honest, I don't know what else to write here.. If you have any questions or suggestions for my novel please let me know after all this story will be something that we both as an Author and Reader will read.