Review Detail of Magus_Mxviil in Naruto : Hinata Hyuga

It's not for everyone, the MC is very dark and seems at times needlessly cruel, but so far the author has done an excellent job with the story. There's a payoff for every choice, even the ones that seem bad at the time. Worldbuilding is excellent, he uses the Byakugan creatively and gives it its deserved spot as an equal of the Sharingan. Imagine if Orochimaru did not get fixated on the Sharingan, the stuff he could accomplish with the Byakugan, combined with meta-knowledge of the verse gives the MC a lot of potential. Downsides: The MC has internal monologues, which might be a story point, if not they add little to the story. The relationships are shallow, the MC exploits everyone so there is possessiveness on her part, but no real depth in the relationships. It is most obvious in her relationship with her mother.