Review Detail of 41d in We, Cryptids
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Great story although needs to fix the wall of text looks like some type of attack on my eyes almost worked too. Other than that book is great and you should push through the wall of text you will see a great unique story. Author also needs to focus less on descriptions.
We, Cryptids
FrozenEntropy
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Hey, thanks for the feedback. I do need to edit the paragraphs, I tend to write them way too large without somehow realizing others dislike that kind of thing. As for descriptions, I expect they'll be needed to build up atmosphere considering this is a horror series, but I'll try not to let it get out of hand. I've been on break for a bit, but I'll write new chapters soon and I hope you can enjoy them. Thanks for your time!