Review Detail of GeneralDeFartos_L in Supreme Villain: Help! Yandere Heroines Keep Stalking Me!

Author, don't delete this review because of low rating. (your work has major shortcomings, accept it) English bad. Writing is confusing. In each chapter there's paragraphs that feel out of place or not belonging there or simply not completed. Sentences inside paragraphs are not coherent, example: first sentence about relevant topic then some random unrelated info then goes back to the relevant topic. Also, author switches inner monologue format style often so it's confusing. the story is all over the place, pacing is bad, world setting not explained, characters not explored. Author, we can't read your mind. This story needs quality proofreading and a redo.