.....it's Ok? Dude has some good word play but any attempt to make any narration look intelligent is ruined by how stupid the author made the MC so for someone like me who likes some form of intelligence in a fic I can never truly get into it.
Neoacoya1
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LIKEI get where you're coming from, but I've always found characters who never make mistakes to be pretty boring. It's so predictable and makes them a bit of a Gary Stu. I would like to point out that just because someone makes a different choice than you would doesn't make them stupid. I could have had Jameson make a hundred different choices and still found ways to place him in danger. Well, not every story is for everybody. That being said, thanks for giving the story a chance and taking the time to leave a review.
Neoacoya1:I get where you're coming from, but I've always found characters who never make mistakes to be pretty boring. It's so predictable and makes them a bit of a Gary Stu. I would like to point out that just because someone makes a different choice than you would doesn't make them stupid. I could have had Jameson make a hundred different choices and still found ways to place him in danger. Well, not every story is for everybody. That being said, thanks for giving the story a chance and taking the time to leave a review.