Review Detail of Breno_Luiz in Heimarian Odyssey

has a good plot. easy to read not many errors that I've noticed and if they are there then it's not to the point of confusing the reader. could improve on the relationship and character interactions as some seam forced to proceed the story and I get that. all in all one of the better ff in this genre in my opinion keep up the good work and post more chapters as soon as possible. thanks