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Review Detail of Lackada1sical in ASOIAF: I'm No Longer A Side Character

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Above average if you can persists some gram errors &or interactions.Timeline/Year isn't clear. My assumptions is at the early stages of House of Dragon timeline (King Jaehaerys).MC is a transmigrated to Androw Farman with 3 perks/blessing (Ability to tame dragons, Cold weapons proficiency/comprehension & Quasi immortality) the perks aren't informative enough wether he can tame morethan 1 dragons, long life span or hi speed regeneration &or melee or ranged weapons as well.MC is aware enough of the incoming disasters/dangers which is good. MC is highly functional as he trains both his physical & mental capabilities. MCs persona is also an additional boon as he is chaotic-neutral/good which is apt for HOTD/ASOIAF World.There several grammar lapses which can be improved on via proof reading, use of grammar corrective apps/progs &or English dictionary.The story & MC progression are average to fast phased which is quite good to avoid info dumps and have us readers more entertained.Upload of chapter is very slow phased as it seems author-san isn't used to it yet as well as word counta are too low.The world of Planetos (HOTD/ASOIAF) isn't develop or explored yet as we are still in the early stages.

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ASOIAF: I'm No Longer A Side Character

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