This is an honest review. Your story is good but not fresh, I believe I've read something like this before either manhwa or mangga, I can't remember tho. For the first chapter you can stretch it more when they're inside the building before they met the terror thing. Power systems is actually hard to write, especially giving stats. I've practicing writing stats to my novel also so I can tell that's hard.. keep this novel updated many will hooked up to your story. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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