Review Detail of Lo_rezi00 in Mystery of the Whispering Grove
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this book is super intruding and has lots of potential.it's surely going to do well once our author improves herself.firstly the synopsis need some development to capture the readers same with the narration.I know everyone has their own perspective when it comes to narrationbut I'd like to ask if our author is writing a prose or drama?sorry if I sounded too inquisitive but I hope our author can do better.
Mystery of the Whispering Grove
MonicaLsk
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you're welcomealso please do some research as switching between prose and drama may confuse readers^_^
MonicaLsk:Thank you very much for your advice. I'm going to fix them as soon as possible. It's my first time writing so your insight is very helpful to me. I don't know yet the style I'm trying to figure out as I'm writing it and change my style accordingly. I'm greatfull for your advice. 😁
Thank you again for the advice. I already started to research some guides to how write fantasy novels, but as English is not my native language I'm sure that I'll make more mistakes. I already edited the synopsis as you suggested and the first two chapters as I'm searching ways to do it better.Again thanks for your time and advices.🙏😁
Lo_rezi00:you're welcomealso please do some research as switching between prose and drama may confuse readers^_^