Review Detail of BreathOfSin in Lookism: Pitch Black

the grammar is great, no doubt about it but, it's just a self insert type of fanfic, MC isn't really unique, the only thing about him that could be said to be unique is that he's part filipino which doesn't really matter. The story closely follows the original work and there's basically no character development for MC, alot of time skips to main events. I would not recommend this unless you want to bore yourself to death.