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I have to be honest, I liked the idea but quickly became disappointed reading the first 40 chapters First of all it’s a chef system which is what made decide to try it but there hardly any cooking. I was surprised when the system awarded him experience for battling and for having a summoning part to it? Once again it seems to be yet another story where the author wants to write a story about fighting but covers it up by naming the book a chef system. If you are going to write an action story, write an action story, I’m tired of all the stories where the contents don’t match the title.
Doomsday Chef System: I Become Stronger by Cooking Rare Ingredients!
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Yeah, truthfully speaking that's one of the many reasons I find myself unable to continue this book. Because it was initially meant to be something vaguely similar to this but when I had begun writing more and more I quickly lost track of the vision of where the story was heading and even from the start I got a bit too ambitious and began mixing premises which would have worked better as separate pieces on their own. So yeah, the score isn't underserved. Thanks for pointing it out
Sorry if I sounded harsh, and it’s not just you. Many titles and authors have done the same thing, and it just gets old. Fey Evolution Merchant? Take the merchant off because the MC hasn’t cared about selling nothing for a long in favor of battling. Astral Pet store? What store? The MC forgets about the store pretty quickly. I have the alchemy god in my head? The MC just constantly battles and rarely refines a pill just to push the the plot forward. I could continue to give examples but it’s tiring to search for a non battle related story about alchemy, blacksmithing, store ownership, restaurants, etc only to have an MC that constantly battles and doesn’t care about what the title of the book is.
Purple_Midnight:Yeah, truthfully speaking that's one of the many reasons I find myself unable to continue this book. Because it was initially meant to be something vaguely similar to this but when I had begun writing more and more I quickly lost track of the vision of where the story was heading and even from the start I got a bit too ambitious and began mixing premises which would have worked better as separate pieces on their own. So yeah, the score isn't underserved. Thanks for pointing it out
I can understand what happened , I actually have two books on webnovel myself even though I haven’t had my application accepted yet. There have been chapters I have rewritten a few times because before I release a chapter I will read it. Then I’ll ask myself question, would this character do this? Why would they do this? Why did this event happen? How would this effect the story? If I’m not satisfied with the answers (which has happened) I’ll see how I can change things to fit the narrative I wish to make. Do I need to create a new character? If an event makes no sense, do I put it on the back burner and wait until it fits, etc. I should state that one of my favorite books is Black tech Internet cafe and I wish I could write like that but I try my best.
Purple_Midnight:Yeah, truthfully speaking that's one of the many reasons I find myself unable to continue this book. Because it was initially meant to be something vaguely similar to this but when I had begun writing more and more I quickly lost track of the vision of where the story was heading and even from the start I got a bit too ambitious and began mixing premises which would have worked better as separate pieces on their own. So yeah, the score isn't underserved. Thanks for pointing it out