Review Detail of AndersonAA123 in The Sun God's Awakening

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AndersonAA123Lv17mthAndersonAA123

After reading some of this, I haven't really connected to this. Although I got asked to read and review this work, I'll be totally honest, it seems a bit formulaic and super inconsistent. Could get better overtime, but as of now, I think it is average AT BEST.

The Sun God's Awakening

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VacaarAuthorVacaar

It is quite unlikely for there to be a harem (odds are like 5%)

Im_LaZy_007:is this harem or Single FL?

6mth

VacaarAuthorVacaar

Fair enough, I can see where some of the issues lie. But what parts could be improved? I just want to make things a bit better.

7mth

Im_LaZy_007Lv4Im_LaZy_007

is this harem or Single FL?

Vacaar:Fair enough, I can see where some of the issues lie. But what parts could be improved? I just want to make things a bit better.

6mth