Review Detail of Theothegiant in My Marine System

great structure, great story over all, i like the way you did emotions with rain and i understand that this book may have been edited here and there. but im just gonna go off what I read I sense a deep lore as deep as you oceans this story resided in! Imagine this is me reviewing the unedited ver of the chapters imagine how could it is now! Keep going Nocturn! You got this