Review Detail of Kingslayer36 in Dragon Ball Alternative
Review detail
seriously this guy can write. the pacing is good though I wish it were a bit faster, I can't really determine it as a bad thing. it's a Good read, maybe the best DBZ fanfiction I've ever read.
Dragon Ball Alternative
Equuleus_Nox
Liked by 1 people
LIKEReplies2
Equuleus_NoxAuthorEquuleus_Nox
Hey thanks! I have been finding that my story arcs appear to be growing longer and longer. I'm trying to cut down on some less necessary scenes, but I need to experiment with that. I'm glad that the quality of the story is impressing you! I can only say that the story is just starting to get into it's groove. The groundwork is set and now the ride is starting...
Kingslayer36Lv12Kingslayer36
Equuleus_Nox:Hey thanks! I have been finding that my story arcs appear to be growing longer and longer. I'm trying to cut down on some less necessary scenes, but I need to experiment with that. I'm glad that the quality of the story is impressing you! I can only say that the story is just starting to get into it's groove. The groundwork is set and now the ride is starting...