Review Detail of DreuxX in Dragon Ball Alternative
Review detail
It has to improve in some way, for example, make the fight faster (create what the outcome will be) or make it more entertaining, the issue of canon, and focus on the development of the main character.
Dragon Ball Alternative
Equuleus_Nox
Liked by 1 people
LIKEReplies3
Understood! To enhance the handling of the canon, they could explore time jumps with brief summaries to avoid predictability. Avoiding unnecessary filler and staying focused on relevant events could help maintain interest. As for humor, it could be more organic to the theme, adapting to the situation and characters to avoid forcing it, allowing it to flow naturally.
Heard! Thanks for your feedback. Lots of good points here! I have been getting quite a lot of feedback regarding story speed. I'm going to do a short experiment condensing the next few chapters I release and see if that might help. I did realize that I kept Ajax out of the spotlight a little too long and I will do my best to rectify that in the future! As for some of your other points, can you help me clarify what you mean? By more entertaining, do you mean more humor, or unexpected developments? By Canon, do you mean to stick less to it or address what it means to Ajax?