Review Detail of Retro_Senpai in Yes sir! I collect Yandere Milf

Hmmm.... It's kind of slow paste, and a little bit edgy here and there. But it's alright, it has one or two spelling mistakes but nothing a little double-checking and editing can't fix. So far not much is known about the word, but it just started so it's understandable. Although I would like an explanation as to why the apocalypse started in the first place, it just felt a little rush if not too sudden. But seeing you have experience in creating Yanders just like your last book I have high expectations for when they show up. But apart from that author Good Luck, and keep up the good work.