Great start!!! The first chapter is really hooking. I was feeling bad for Lucas, but then it slowly changed. Thoroughly enjoying what I'm reading. Great beginning, [img=update][img=update][img=update]author !!! [img=update][img=update][img=update] Vivid descriptions given, I could actually visualise what I was reading. Good job.
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