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Lagash
LagashLv14mthLagash

I dont even know anything by chapter 20 and why it happened, plot holes are massive, while no real progress even more confusing the way you did the transmigration is just confusing and makes no sense. the story didnt pull me in the first 20 chapters sorry. I cant read this.

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Rich Villain of the Ruined World

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DevilDarkness
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I agree actually. it's my own fault for ruining it in a twisted way. I'm rewriting it from the very beginning, and starting anew from a whole new world and new character personas and growth methods.