Great novel I like it a lot my only issue is that he uses lightning. But that’s just me personally bc I think it’s overused and there are other elements that are not shown enough like water or earth.
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LIKE1stDrunkenImmortal:And mc us a vampire he should be using shadows or something that doesn’t emit heat and light.
1stDrunkenImmortal:I think my only real problem with lighting is that it’s not really a element you can get creative with as most of the time people use it for speed enhancements or shoot bolt of lighting at the enemy. I just think you could use water or earth better in most environments.
1stDrunkenImmortal:And mc us a vampire he should be using shadows or something that doesn’t emit heat and light.