Review Detail of Kellan in MoMo: The Silent Virtuoso

The story is good but the chapters seem very short, and situations fast paced. There is very little world building to understand the characters place and the environment there within. The story is very nicely written with grammar and detailing the characters expressions and emotions. But it feels hollow due to the quick pace and lack of build up especially present in moments where tension should be held is ended in a chapter. Overall I feel the author has a lot of potential, and so does the story it just heavily lacks world background and build up.