Review Detail of Zhorvak in Thor in DC universe ( dropped )

Item: Thor in DC universe ( dropped )
Rating: 1

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The idea is good, but the execution and the writing is lacking, you'll need to edit your texts better for it feels like there is no room to breath and no pauses

Thor in DC universe ( dropped )

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preet_dhaliwal8077Authorpreet_dhaliwal8077

Thanks for your reviews and yes I pay heed to your words, I'm writing a novel named "god of thunder with system, so I would appreciate if you read it and leave a review

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