While I enjoyed the overall novel, I must admit that Chapter 1 failed to captivate my interest, especially the first page. The opening lacked the gripping allure that I was hoping for. but story and idea is good .
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I was thinking of fixing it and make some editing on it but what about the rest of the Story it's exciting to read?
I like the story . I like the idea
Aria44:I was thinking of fixing it and make some editing on it but what about the rest of the Story it's exciting to read?