Review Detail of Made in Custom Made Eldritch Creature
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The prologue of the story was all just memories that the main character saw. I understand it’s hard to that the prologue was trying to be cool with the whole “it’s a prologue surprise” but I guess people didn’t like it. In the end I understand that not many people like that and that most people can’t wrap their head around the new stuff I’m adding. I probably have to make more of a background for the knowledge. The main character starts in a place called “The In-Between” this place is designed to help the eldritch creatures spawned in there grow by them fighting each other. After 67 hours the exit to the realm opens up allowing all creatures to go to “The Outside” which is a place like “The Abyss” from Custom Made Demon King.
You should have given it 5 stars lol it’s great I like it! Fun take yes I can see why it could be concerned annoying but…. Glad to know the OP of our mc basically being…. Great job!!! Can’t wait for SCP!!!
HopOffMe:The prologue of the story was all just memories that the main character saw. I understand it’s hard to that the prologue was trying to be cool with the whole “it’s a prologue surprise” but I guess people didn’t like it. In the end I understand that not many people like that and that most people can’t wrap their head around the new stuff I’m adding. I probably have to make more of a background for the knowledge. The main character starts in a place called “The In-Between” this place is designed to help the eldritch creatures spawned in there grow by them fighting each other. After 67 hours the exit to the realm opens up allowing all creatures to go to “The Outside” which is a place like “The Abyss” from Custom Made Demon King.
CMDK really went boom at the beginning and also in the middle. Love the MC powers and imagination. I also love the Darksiders and the Might and Magic plot. But the Diablo plot now was milking so much that I find it boring. The only thing I find it unlikable was that there is no female game characters or movie characters as the female leads. Like all of them were original. But nevertheless the beginning and the mid plot was superb.
HopOffMe:The prologue of the story was all just memories that the main character saw. I understand it’s hard to that the prologue was trying to be cool with the whole “it’s a prologue surprise” but I guess people didn’t like it. In the end I understand that not many people like that and that most people can’t wrap their head around the new stuff I’m adding. I probably have to make more of a background for the knowledge. The main character starts in a place called “The In-Between” this place is designed to help the eldritch creatures spawned in there grow by them fighting each other. After 67 hours the exit to the realm opens up allowing all creatures to go to “The Outside” which is a place like “The Abyss” from Custom Made Demon King.
And besides I'm searching for like a fanmade version for years where MC was from the Angel side and also has custom made system. But never found it till I've come across your ff here with the same tone.
HopOffMe:The prologue of the story was all just memories that the main character saw. I understand it’s hard to that the prologue was trying to be cool with the whole “it’s a prologue surprise” but I guess people didn’t like it. In the end I understand that not many people like that and that most people can’t wrap their head around the new stuff I’m adding. I probably have to make more of a background for the knowledge. The main character starts in a place called “The In-Between” this place is designed to help the eldritch creatures spawned in there grow by them fighting each other. After 67 hours the exit to the realm opens up allowing all creatures to go to “The Outside” which is a place like “The Abyss” from Custom Made Demon King.
Nah the Diablo plot was bareable for me due to the fact Osiris was getting his get back with Gabriel. That’s where everything got exciting.
Dr_Chad:CMDK really went boom at the beginning and also in the middle. Love the MC powers and imagination. I also love the Darksiders and the Might and Magic plot. But the Diablo plot now was milking so much that I find it boring. The only thing I find it unlikable was that there is no female game characters or movie characters as the female leads. Like all of them were original. But nevertheless the beginning and the mid plot was superb.
Sadly not many people can keep a story like that going due to the fact it’s harder to keep the main characters power in check with the other powers. I might dip my hand in this idea later though.
Dr_Chad:And besides I'm searching for like a fanmade version for years where MC was from the Angel side and also has custom made system. But never found it till I've come across your ff here with the same tone.
HopOffMe:Nah the Diablo plot was bareable for me due to the fact Osiris was getting his get back with Gabriel. That’s where everything got exciting.
Most people like myself respect the Author for making the two female leads OC's and not taking pre-existing characters but to each their own I guess and Benia was literary a twin of Biara (a female villain in Might and Magic) and Julia was a clone of Jubileus but now she's the main body while Jubileus is more like a past life incarnation although these are OC's in the end they are in one way related to certain female game characters he just went about it differently. And also the Diablo world is great and it's not even that long honestly and Gabriel had to pay. Although as a huge Diablo fan there were certain things the Author has wrong but it's something you can just gloss over
Dr_Chad:CMDK really went boom at the beginning and also in the middle. Love the MC powers and imagination. I also love the Darksiders and the Might and Magic plot. But the Diablo plot now was milking so much that I find it boring. The only thing I find it unlikable was that there is no female game characters or movie characters as the female leads. Like all of them were original. But nevertheless the beginning and the mid plot was superb.