Well thought out dialouge, interesting and fun main character. t he book if we’ll thought out and crafted it is worth a read through. I’ve only seen one grammatical error in3 chapters. Please continue writing, this book has great potential.
TheKeyAndTheGate
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LIKETheKeyAndTheGate:thanks for your comment. and yes, i'll continue with this work, until this time, i was loved writing a litRPG story, is some times a bit difficult, because some things need to be known by the reader, but its only a fun aspect of writing this project
TheKeyAndTheGate:thanks for your comment. and yes, i'll continue with this work, until this time, i was loved writing a litRPG story, is some times a bit difficult, because some things need to be known by the reader, but its only a fun aspect of writing this project