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okay, seeing this was published nearly half a year ago and 90 chapters are there, It's almost one chapter every alternate day which is nice, writing quality is also up to the standard, character is also a bit unique, I am happy it's not a boring generic mc of standard isekai fanfics who is supposed to make every decision right, on that note, I would suggest author to make Mc suffer due to his stupid decisions he might make which is highly likely coz of his character which will make a bit entertaining for us, and for a story to be enjoyable, it's not necessary for a mc to be smart or not dumb, coz mc's of favourite stories like One piece, Naruto.. etc are just in that umbrella, and still I like them, no need to strive for perfection, plus the decisions he is making is affecting the world... you should not make all that in good direction as I have seen, Some unknowing decisions of his should make the world more worse than cannon in some aspects as I don't like everything good happening in the novel, it feels like wish fulfilment which probably it is, but that' just a opinion of mine which you are free to ignore... charcter's are given some depth which is high by webnovel standards, so is world building, you have put effort in researching, some things are illogical, but so is the original series itself, so I am not gonna complain about that and just assume chakra to be magical which it should be, Looking forward to how you make this story interesting after this point...

Naruto: Legacy of Lava, Ice and Storm

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Pikachu234
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He may suffer soon enough

Desire96
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dude, you are commenting on wrong fic

Pikachu234:He may suffer soon enough