Liked the idea of the system and the different cheats we've seen so far, but before the introduction of the said cheat we could've seen some world building and character introduction, how the Mc just feels on a normal day, his ambitions, his family (of he has one) his relations with other people and how and why he is in that sect. The Mc personality feel kinda bland tbh, would've really loved to see more of him at the start without cheat , seeing how much him and his peers struggle with normal cultivation would've really made me more attached to him. The fact that nobody doubted anything when he was a nobody and suddenly has a leap of strength is suspicious too, anyways loved the setting and cheat but more world building and character refining on the Mc and the other characters would be welcome
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