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The story thus far is good. A bit on the slower-paced side after Chapter 13/15, when the first climax of the story happens to you know who. After that, the pacing slows a bit until the MC manages to get rid of the guard, which is great to show development and how the MC feels, but after that, the pace slows even more, which is a bit sad given how consistent it was in the first fifteen chapters or so. It doesn't take away from the story as a whole, which stands as an enjoyable experience despite the fact we don't know much about the world besides some species, universal energy, and black metal. Overall it is a good story.

Mythological System

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Thank you for the feedback.