i will make it Fast. story doesnt flow well and character interactions seems odd to me for some reason. yep. thats all.😐😐 ugh review word limit.
Nepge
Liked it!
LIKEThe story doesn't flow well? I know I've yet to introduce anything related to the second war yet because I plan to hold off on doing anything with that since we are completely focused on Arisu for now. As for interactions well that's because they have actual personalities with flaws with them. It's not yet shown fully because I'm pacing into showing these flaws on display inevitably. Not many people who write Fanfic's add flaws to their OC's whilst I not added a flaw to them I even did so with the MC.