Review Detail of Altairshadow00 in As a Mangaka at TYPE-MOON!

For some reason, when I read it, it felt flat and there was a lack of energy in this story. Moreover, the MC has a brain problem. If making a manga will get the power of the manga or protagonist then the MC should make a one-shot about the manga Overlord or One Punch Man. at least you get death magic abilities and other magic or physical abilities that can break the limiter