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Review Detail of Aztec_Azazel in Eternal Emperor's Path to Ascension

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writing is good story development is not good, you try to imitate Han jue but your MC is subpar, the decisions he makes are not good, 1st why not hide your face?, 2nd why reveal your name ? 3rd why join that third rate sect with bad karma at all, though he said he wanted connections why not go pick some orphans and raise them atleast they will be royal to you even though there's a chance of betrayal, Han Jue was cautious but he knew how to enjoy a good woman, as a man you should aspire to have a good woman, but i bet your MC will remain a virgin til the end of times. Am really disappointed because your novel has a good potential,.

Eternal Emperor's Path to Ascension

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Well, it's my first time writing a novel so there are bound to be a lot of mistakes. But I'm really grateful for your honest review and that you pointed them out, I'll try to do better in the future. As for the last sentence, we'll have to wait for that!