Review Detail of Kiss_melani in THE SIBLING'S REBELS

Nice story!, love samson and Solomon. The plot is neatly arranged, the introduction, palace and stuff. But some place were confusing like samson being locked up. The conversation between Prince beck.. , The boys dad wasn't clear. Also when samson screamed on seeing a ghost, the conversation there wasn't straightforward, I had to read twice to understand. Please work on those. The dialogues should be spaced or separated from the description. I love the story, palace with magic? Definitely my thing. Kudos to you author.