Review Detail of Garland in One Piece: The Admiral's Treacherous Path

Alright thanks for the feedback I guess? Anyway let me address the main points of your review, 1st of all, it is a Chinese fanfiction...2nd, the betrayal isn't even a betrayal, from what I noticed it has been said from the very beginning that the MC of this Chinese fanfiction's base has always been kinda corrupted, and the plot-driving thingy of this novel is exactly profits, the main character hasn't trained even once in his life, he used the money he gathered with this kind of lifestyle to reach the status of an admiral (money burning system), and exactly for that reason, knowing full well he is going to retire soon, he chooses to just get the most out of it while he still could... So yeah, he was never "loyal" in the first place, in the One Piece world you either are a pirate or you are under the Marines and the world government (let's forget about bounty hunters for now), being a Marine gives you more chances and information with how to plan your course of actions. That's why he's even a Marine. Damn I talk a lot.3rd, what do you even mean with "everything" at least define it a little bit, because from my point of view everything followed exactly a believable course, the Marines know there is someone high enough that is causing problems, but the pirates won't wait for the internal strifles to be settled, they will take advantage of that, and just like Doflamingo had a Vice Admiral inside the Marine organization, others will probably have the same.Anyway, talked too much, thanks for the honest albeit probably biased against Chinese fanfictions opinion. I hope you find a good read.