Review Detail of PiousLight in DxD: I Like Orange

Let's start with the fact that it is a fanfic from the page spiritfanfiction with the name "Pinte o Mundo de Laranja" or translated "Pinta el Mundo de Naranja" by Da3va, the truth when I first started reading this story tickled my memory until today's chapter where Naruto makes a comment to the name of the fanfic and I remembered that I had already seen it. The truth is that I loved it when I saw it two years ago, I always found it sad that the author didn't continue with the story, since it had a lot of potential and it was the time when I was quite obsessed with Naruto's theme in other worlds. I don't know, in my opinion the author should give credit to that original author of the story if you are using his work and if you plan to continue with it since you are profiting from it, besides splitting original chapters to charge more or however the dreaded P. page works since the original work ended with only 28 chapters. My recommendation, identify and highlight when a character is talking as there are times when it is too confusing because if you are going to continue with the author's story that would make it more comfortable to read. I will change the rating if the author continues with original material.