Review Detail of DUCKINGAROUND in In Lookism as a system for Daniel Park

Item: In Lookism as a system for Daniel Park
Rating: 3

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DUCKINGAROUNDLv44mthDUCKINGAROUND

Reading this made me realize how good MTL novels really are, thank you.

In Lookism as a system for Daniel Park

HAMMAD

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DaoOfRizznessLv4DaoOfRizzness

and please how you make the letters big or small like its just unpleasant to the eye but the concept is good nonetheleless.

HAMMAD:I Hope you can please respond. Bro I just lost all confidence in my almost none to 0 writing skills. Please I Hope you respond and tell me is this fanfic really that bad. Cause if it is then rather then wasting time. I could just do something else.

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HAMMADAuthorHAMMAD

Is this really that bad.

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HAMMADAuthorHAMMAD

I Hope you can please respond. Bro I just lost all confidence in my almost none to 0 writing skills. Please I Hope you respond and tell me is this fanfic really that bad. Cause if it is then rather then wasting time. I could just do something else.

HAMMAD:Is this really that bad.

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DUCKINGAROUNDLv4DUCKINGAROUND

No it's not really bad per se, It's just the writing and grammar that made it bad, but the concept and progression is alright

HAMMAD:I Hope you can please respond. Bro I just lost all confidence in my almost none to 0 writing skills. Please I Hope you respond and tell me is this fanfic really that bad. Cause if it is then rather then wasting time. I could just do something else.

4mth

YangRenLv5YangRen

yeah

DUCKINGAROUND:No it's not really bad per se, It's just the writing and grammar that made it bad, but the concept and progression is alright

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HAMMADAuthorHAMMAD

can you comment to the place where you see this problem. so i will avoid it in the furture.

DaoOfRizzness:and please how you make the letters big or small like its just unpleasant to the eye but the concept is good nonetheleless.

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