Review Detail of mckeekmb in [ Deleted]

the issue i have with this story is that it is hard to follow. i cant tell if the guy who is playing Alien if he is talking or someone else. its confusing, i was hoping you give the guy who is playing Alien a name, and why are you not letting us see Alien killing all the people? i was hoping we would see more of HIM the ALIEN development. I have watched all the Alien movies and was hoping to see more gruesome stuff that they did in the movies onto this novel. I understand you cant copy all of it, but Alien was lethal creatures. Again i cant tell who is talking is it the Alien or someone else? please give the Alien a NAME..Like you did for the slime