Review Detail of EVIDBESCUS in Game of Thrones: Victor Di Natale

Thank you, I am glad for any input or suggestions!

it was like 10 chapters of history, no content of the mc. You need to tone down the word filler information

The MC was just born. I first need to fill the world while he slowly grows up. But will tone it down from now on. Thanks!

ya, but you have the world history already because it's a ff of Game of Thrones if you done it in like 1 two 2 chapters because the world already exists, then add his family it would be a good read

Will there be a harem?

No idea. MC isn't even 6 years olt yet... Too much chapters to write before he is even capable of doing the deed xD

Do you have an answer for the romance/harem question now?

Well there are already two future love interests confirmed. I am pretty sure I will add something to that later on. But my story is slow paced..

I’m in chapter 13 and wanted to know if the Mc will keep away from power with his absolute power corrupts thing or will he change his mind?

Probably yes, at least in my mind right now. Even if I would change my mind, it will take a very long time for him to even have the opportunity to become a king. Maybe a king of Essos.

Yes in he won’t change his mind and would only keep finding partners to maintain the balance of power?

Yes. In all honesty, I don't think sitting in the Iron Throne and living in a place riddled with holes and spies will feel comfortable.

It doesn’t have to be the iron throne, it would have been even better if he created the kingdom, problably stating with Lys.