Review Detail of Kqro in Parallel World Game Designer

Item: Parallel World Game Designer
Rating: 4.4

Review detail

KqroLv47mthKqro

Hello, I read the first 3 chapters, and I have to say I'm satisfied so far. Here are some tips to attract as many readers as possible:1. Don't describe the appearance of any character or their culture, so readers can imagine everything. I dropped many stories where I couldn't relate to the protagonist, or all characters had the same skin color.2. As the second game, I recommend creating something like Marvel's Spider-Man, considering its current hype due to the PS5 game. Since the protagonist's world is technologically advanced, you can create a VR (Virtual Reality) game with a large map.3. The protagonist MUST NOT BE A LOSER, nor overly simple or submissive.4. For updates, try to post every day with more than 1000 words, and you'll receive a lot of stones.That's all for now.

Parallel World Game Designer

SunfishAshes

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KqroLv4Kqro

And dont loss too much time on flappy bird became with all honesty.. that game sucks.

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SunfishAshesAuthorSunfishAshes

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind. PS: MC won't fit the beta male mold; he's a bona fide gigachad(or tries to be). He tries to be cool (since who doesn't)while maintaining a neutral demeanor and is amicable with most folks, provided their intentions are good.

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KqroLv4Kqro

good. i hope you don't drop the story or get Cancer, I've seen too many good stories dropping for that 💀. Good day

SunfishAshes:Thanks for the review! I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind. PS: MC won't fit the beta male mold; he's a bona fide gigachad(or tries to be). He tries to be cool (since who doesn't)while maintaining a neutral demeanor and is amicable with most folks, provided their intentions are good.

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SunfishAshesAuthorSunfishAshes

Don't worry good lad even if i don't feel motivated I'll still write, I won't abandon it, not even considering it. If real-life issues crop up that prevent me from focusing on it, I'll go on hiatus for a week at most.

Kqro:good. i hope you don't drop the story or get Cancer, I've seen too many good stories dropping for that 💀. Good day

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KqroLv4Kqro

Good, about the names use chat gpt.Pls make Minecraft as the second game, make it better than the trash that we have, add mobs and biomes.And divide the chapters from the notes, its's confusing.

SunfishAshes:Don't worry good lad even if i don't feel motivated I'll still write, I won't abandon it, not even considering it. If real-life issues crop up that prevent me from focusing on it, I'll go on hiatus for a week at most.
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SunfishAshesAuthorSunfishAshes

I'm a massive Minecraft fan; I watch a ton of videos about it every day, so I'll give it my best shot! As for the second game, it'll depend on the votes, but I can promise that the games I love and the ones you love will all have a chance to shine.

Kqro:Good, about the names use chat gpt.Pls make Minecraft as the second game, make it better than the trash that we have, add mobs and biomes.And divide the chapters from the notes, its's confusing.

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KqroLv4Kqro

i hope so.

SunfishAshes:I'm a massive Minecraft fan; I watch a ton of videos about it every day, so I'll give it my best shot! As for the second game, it'll depend on the votes, but I can promise that the games I love and the ones you love will all have a chance to shine.
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