Review Detail of Harem_God_Zero in Apex: The New Peter Parker
Review detail
Shameless author review I mean its my story way wouldn't I give a five star review but in all seriousness I hope you enjoy and please give a honest and valid "review" keyword review I don't want any I don't like the story because it's a harem I want a review im not going to bow to you just because you put a one star review just go some where else now if you put a one star review and you have a valid point than is when I listen
Apex: The New Peter Parker
Harem_God_Zero
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I know im gonna give him upgraded haki but not right now this is a op fanfiction to when the enemies get stronger Peter gets at least 4 times stronger then them
ChesterCure:Only Haki? it's kind of a weak ability to be honest. It basically the same with spider power but without being connected to the Web of Life and destiny. Note, I'm not saying your fic bad, just saying if you're going to give him an ability then maybe a devil fruit and Haki since it makes a bit more unique. Still this my opinion cause what I gave you my Peter mc is op. Also, Magic and Chi exist you know that right?
Only Haki? it's kind of a weak ability to be honest. It basically the same with spider power but without being connected to the Web of Life and destiny. Note, I'm not saying your fic bad, just saying if you're going to give him an ability then maybe a devil fruit and Haki since it makes a bit more unique. Still this my opinion cause what I gave you my Peter mc is op. Also, Magic and Chi exist you know that right?