webnovel

Review Detail of Epic_Gaming_7548 in The Day of the Draw at Hogwarts

Review detail

Epic_Gaming_7548
Epic_Gaming_7548Lv11mthEpic_Gaming_7548

decent quality of translation, not many grammatical errors but a couple names and repeating paragraphs come up. The main reason i give such a mid score is because like 5 percent of the story is missing, and its like important bits, like the sacred contract came out of nowhere and besides copying Hermione and fluffy there wasn't a mention of him copying the phoenix or dragon and why is it now called a soul ring? and thats all of the top of my head

The Day of the Draw at Hogwarts

young_sunlight

Liked it!

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!