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krokrok007
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its great fanfic the only thing that could be better is how in the beginning the MC acts like young master that can't see mount Tai when he isnt even that strong And some gramaticall mistakes

Danmachi - Infinite Mana System!

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i see what you did there noice

KasiCair
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Yeah, the beginning is mentally painful to read. The way the MC talks? It makes the author seem mentally challenged. The way he easily gets angry for no good reason at all? He needs some emotional counseling. The opinions this author/MC have? Some of them are really making my brain just stop, wondering if my IQ is not dropping from reading it. It is a pity. I quite liked this author's One Piece fic. It was not perfect by any means but much better than this. Can't really judge the 'advanced' chapters since I am not there yet. But I am having really hard time not dropping it and I am still just at ch10.

KasiCair
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Yeah, I got as far as ch13 before I gave up. I just can't. With every paragraph, the MC seems dumber and dumber. The author is clearly thinking he is cool by acting like 9 yo mentally challenged Chinese Young Master. This is worthless garbage. Sorry, I am salty. Because the idea has a lot of potential. But it seems the author is hell-bent on making it worse and worse with how his MC acts. It's aggravating. For those wondering if they should read this... make sure you can turn your brain off to the point where you start involuntarily drooling due to how mentally absent you'd be. If you can do that, then go for it.

KasiCair:Yeah, the beginning is mentally painful to read. The way the MC talks? It makes the author seem mentally challenged. The way he easily gets angry for no good reason at all? He needs some emotional counseling. The opinions this author/MC have? Some of them are really making my brain just stop, wondering if my IQ is not dropping from reading it. It is a pity. I quite liked this author's One Piece fic. It was not perfect by any means but much better than this. Can't really judge the 'advanced' chapters since I am not there yet. But I am having really hard time not dropping it and I am still just at ch10.