Review Detail of larkin_klarkin in Double Comparison: Start with Revolutionary Army

I got to chapter 8 before i stopped reading since from what i can see its not edited at all well its better than a few other translations out there and worse than alot others. I don't get why the translators keep posting theese things without editing them . I mean if you're gonna go trough the trouble of translating some novel and wants money for it on patreon why not do it right and edit the story so the text has a better flow and makes more sence.