Review Detail of EvilBlueCrystal in One Piece: Transmigrated as Rob Lucci
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Gets fruit from God, first thing he does is explain and reveal it to everyone. His fruit ability is very op that can extract others fruits, why would he think noone would backstab him. Reincarnates but already has rivals and teammates the first day. Paragraphs too big, there's monologue multiplied by ten. Dialogue is very casual, they talk like children playing Minecraft pretending to be a polite and honest individuals. Mc explain his plans openly all the time, and gives friendly tips. Battles are too early, he's gathering fruits like it's nothing. His crew is only there to help him get more fruits.
One Piece: Transmigrated as Rob Lucci
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First, yes, the conversations among them are not that complicated for three reasons. First, I'm new at writing stories so don't expect me to be that good also this is a hobby, second if you watch or read OP most of the people talk like that and third English is not my main language. Yes, he gets a crew from the start thanks to the setting I used, as they are on the run from W.G. And what good would it do to them if they backstab him? Also, they are friends since they were kids so that counts for something. He is a normal dude not some master mind schemer, so yes he will tell his crewmates his plans and there was no big fight till now for them to get involved into.