This is one of the better stories that have come out recently. I only have two issues with it one being some of the grammer or words used don’t make sense but you still kind of get what the author is trying to say and the other is the constant recap of the previous chapter that takes up from a quarter to a third of the chapter and sometimes the recap is almost the whole chapter this feels like a waste of coins/free passes. Even with these negatives the story is good enough that I would still read it just hope the author would stop with the recaps if people forget what happened they can go back and read the previous chapter instead of wasting so much of a chapter.
RagingArtPunk
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