World building for this novel is amazing. But, the novel is not great because main characters building is simply cliche without any development. At last chapters, author is randomly throwing plot. There’s also repeat chapters. Plus missed chapters. Huge plot hole. At this point, it looks like it’s rough draft instead of actual novel. If that is the case, I will recommend rewriting it with smooth chapter transition. With that you will have lot more people reading
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