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Freako2323
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The Concept is something that I really like, especially with his ability and trauma system. The more scientific nature of the story is interesting and makes it interesting. It also reminds me a lot of a story called “Swallowed Star” that is very good and has a number of similarities in my mind. However, the writing quality has some odd wording at times, and it seems like there are several missing chapters that just were skipped over and you will suddenly find yourself in a whole different place with no idea of what happened between the two points. Which is a huge negative to the flow of the story, and some stuff also ends us feeling very stretched out. There is not a huge amount of early world building and it leaves much to be desired in that regard, as if stuff is just getting made up as it goes.

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RagingArtPunk
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Thank you for your review ☺ . I have started editing the chapters and I am 20 percent into it. When I am done, I will comment on this review. Thanks once again

mystery_anonymous
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please read my new novel "The end of world has not yet begun, the system is activated in advance"