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Review Detail of MorTemTK in NARUTO, Kushina's Brother

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MorTemTK
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I have no complaints about your updating stability and writing quality, and the story and world building is decent. The problems begin with the way you’ve been handling the MC, I get that he’s a genius and all, but having him kill someone when he’s 2 is a bit much, that and being encouraged to do it by an uzumaki seems a bit out of character. Also this is just another fanon with a hate boner for hurizen where he knows about danzo doing experiments and brushes off 8000 people dying in them as it was nothing, nevermind its established that he respected his senses and was disgusted by orochimaru simply resurrecting hashirama, and Mito being okay with the idea of resurrecting past Shinobis also doesn’t sit right with me, at the end of the day this is just my personal opinion, it’s still well written and will probably be entertaining as long as you aren’t too attached to how the characters were portrayed in the show.

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NARUTO, Kushina's Brother

Cole_Bromley

Liked it!

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MorTemTK
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Respects his sensei ***