Review Detail of Vesper_Evernight in Danmachi: The Cursed Spear

Honest Personal Review (HPR) Wow, Just WOW! I am an aspiring Author myself or hope to be one someday and I just gotta say something about this Diamond in a rough. The Prologue Hook is mysteriously placed that it will force you to look forward to the story. The Interaction between the Characters seem profound that they feel real and more pronounced not just names and roles in paper for appearance sake, In addition to the well placed dialogues. I love how you described the settings and following actions in a constructive manner to aid the readers in imagining the scene and Sceneries that at the same time also keeps us immersed and focused on what will happen next.I gotta say this writing style makes me remember Shadow Slave* by Guilty Three keep it up, and thank you for starting this ff. aside from the occasional spelling errors this is a 4.6 review for me.just because I haven't seen much further yet.